FragrantMemory
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Post by FragrantMemory on Nov 2, 2011 16:33:18 GMT -5
Staring at my professor's comments on my Microeconomics paper.
"While I don’t deduct for it, I found your writing style to be excessively wordy and flowery."
"... More simply?"
"Unusual description... and very wordy."
"Simple language, please."
So... I've no idea what to do about this. Maybe I was too impassioned over the electricity outage of the earlier 2000s.
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Post by Xyrad on Nov 4, 2011 2:02:11 GMT -5
^ Hahahahahahahaha
Just waiting for a file transfer that's been going all night to finish.
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Post by daint on Nov 4, 2011 12:23:10 GMT -5
Staring at my professor's comments on my Microeconomics paper. "While I don’t deduct for it, I found your writing style to be excessively wordy and flowery." "... More simply?" "Unusual description... and very wordy." "Simple language, please." So... I've no idea what to do about this. Maybe I was too impassioned over the electricity outage of the earlier 2000s. i think maybe your professor wanted you to get to the point lol i imagine he/she had many papers to grade about econ no less waiting for the pumpkin pie to finish!!!  |
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Post by daint on Nov 13, 2011 20:39:28 GMT -5
^ you mentioned multiple times of having close friends betray you, during your last HS year as well as making your condition worse after your mom died... i wonder, would you be there for them if they were in trouble? say, if they were in similar anguish?
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ATM, research on mineral oil
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Post by daint on Nov 14, 2011 0:30:15 GMT -5
^ I don't think i would have handled everything as well as you. you're right that people really shouldn't complain because they could have it much worse. no one knows this as well as you, but you need to take pride in it instead of be swayed by bitterness. it's normal to be bitter, but not to the point of abandoning ur health.
i don't think you're cruel. it doesn't make sense to try to protect/help those who you once trusted and yet they tried to harm you. it may have been a cold night, but you bear mental scars.
you've been through a lot. you have every right to be mad, go on a rampage(as long as you don't hurt anyone... even if they deserve it, don't get yourselfin trouble), cry, scream, splurge, go shopping, do whatever it takes to make yourself feel better.
you won't be doing anything selfish.
no one's a saint... sometimes you shouldn't have expectations.
either way i think ur inspirational. do you have a blog or something? you could turn your most difficult times into a multichapter installment or an anonymous account
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Post by FragrantMemory on Nov 21, 2011 16:29:38 GMT -5
Yes, I do have a blog. Several, actually. I actually extract more pleasure through my hobbies than anything - structure is nice, but I don't prefer most people right.
Lately I've been testing out some video editing software. Even if nothing comes out of it, it's still useful know-how. I can now sharpen low-quality videos and convert to different resolutions and extensions.
ATM, I am initiating a download on the school's connection... puahaha... I'll be here a while anyway.
Also bulldozing through some bad debts expenses and accounts receivables.
I don't like the debts chapter. I don't like writing people off or reinstating them. Maybe because I already know it's one of my least desired careers.
Either way, I wonder how these corporations calculate the uncollectibles from the accumulated sales of ALL customers. Their spreadsheets probably look a hot mess. Also curious about how much of this particular account is dealt with by accounts receivable clerks.
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Post by Xyrad on Nov 22, 2011 4:10:40 GMT -5
ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz..............................
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Post by sammy on Nov 22, 2011 15:50:34 GMT -5
happy to be back at CS, millions of thoughts atm
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Post by FragrantMemory on Nov 23, 2011 14:49:43 GMT -5
Chopping up a fight scene and then going through light editing before I upload it to youtube.
There is freedom within, there is freedom without...
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Post by sammy on Nov 23, 2011 16:25:17 GMT -5
^ niece Ling, the words "there is freedom within, there is freedom without is part of the lyrics to a Crowded House song Dont dream its over
I was commenting on some audio forums and very late replies on youtube, then dropped by CS
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Post by FragrantMemory on Dec 2, 2011 22:54:40 GMT -5
^Yeah, I was actually listening to that - the cover, though, by Sixpence None the Richer. Pretty nice. (:
Eating brown rice with mussels and... organic tomato sauce. Sounds strange, but it's not baaad.... man, those essays stole my DAY.
But I'll make up for it tomorrowwwwww!!!
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